2019柱状图毕业生去向
2019柱状图毕业生去向
第一段第一句总体概括as can be noticeably seen in the bar graph above, there were obvious changes in the proportion of graduates’ different choices of the future in certain college in the year of 2013 and 2018.（下划线字也可以写成 graduates’ choices of career development 或者 college students who chose different roads）
第一段第二句数据描写to be more exact , the percentage of graduates who found a job decreased slightly from 68.1% in 2013 to 60.7% in 2018.
第一段第三句数据描写 on the contrary,there was a moderate upward trend of the graduates who studied for a master degree from 26.3% to 34.0% during the same period.
第一段第四句数据描写the proportion of the college students who started their own business climbed slowly from 1.3% to 2.6%.
第二段第一句过渡句from my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation.
第二段第二句因果分析firstly，it was due to the recession of chinese economy and the increasing competition in the job market that more students could not land a job.（强调句型模板）
第二段第三句因果分析secondly, students’ mind shifted from material pursuit to academic researches ,which could give rise to the fact that more students took and passed the national postgraduate entrance examination.（定语从句+同位语从句）
第二段第四句因引用lastly, jack ma has said，“ never should we ignore the difficulties of starting one’s own business no matter what we do. ”thus，more graduates chose to build their own careers；however，the percentage was still small.(黑体字这句是补充扣题的，也可以不写)
第三段模板几乎不用改动
第三段第一句总结based on what has been argued ,it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really true for college students. (由于这个现象就业率下降并不好，但是考研人多还挺好，所以我没有用reasonable and positive 的模板 ，改为true)
第三段第二句建议it is advisable for students and teachers to center on this situation. （建议人们关注这个现象）
第三段第三句展望unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
英语二2018年作文模板套用
2018 饼状图选择餐厅
第一段第一句 as can be clearly seen in the pie graph above,there are different factors that consumers would consider when choosing a restaurant.
第一段第二句 to be more specific, among these categories,( the characteristic of the restaurant) was the most important factor for consumers with the percentage of 36.3% ,after which (the service ) came with a proportion of 26.8% , followed by the environment ,the price and the others with 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively.
第二段第一句from my point of view, the following factors may account for the above situation.
第二段第二句firstly，it was due to the advancement of citizens’ consumption notion and ability that more people did not attach great importance to the price.
第二段第三句 in addition, consumers went to a restaurant not just to have meals but to communicate with friends as well,which contributed to the fact that the environment was paid more attention to.（contribute to=give rise to）
第二段第三句lastly, jack ma has said, “ never can we ignore the significance of characteristics and innovation no matter what we do.”thus, the most consumers prefer characteristics.
第三段第一句based on what has been argued, it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for consumers.
第三段第二句what can be suggested is that restaurant owners are supposed to focus on this trend and try to offer amazing characteristics.
第三段第三句unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2017年 博物馆数量和参观博物馆人数变化
分析：注意有年代变化，所以用柱状图和线图的模板，无年代变化就是饼状图模板
第一段第一句总说：as is clearly demonstrated in the line graph above,there were obvious changes in the number of chinese museums and the citizens who visited them in china from 2013 to 2015 .
第一段第二句具体数据描述1：to be more specific, the number of museums in china increased slightly from 4165 in 2013 to 4692 in 2015.
第一段第三句 数据描述2：in comparison，there was an obvious upward trend of the number of trips to these museums from 637.8 million in 2013 to 781.1 million in 2015 .（可以换成during the same period）
第二段第一句过渡：from my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation.
第二段第二句因果论证：firstly， it was due to the rapid advancement and development of chinese economy and the museum industry that an increasing number of museums were built in china.（万能因果1）
第二段第三句因果： secondly，more chinese citizens’ mind shifted from material pursuit to spiritual needs，which could give rise to the fact that numerous citizens preferred to appreciate art in museums.(万能因果2)
第二段第四句因果，引用，倒装lastly, jack ma has said，“ never should we ignore the significance of art no matter what we do.”
（…significance of broadening our horizons 万能因果4 ）
（these words strike a deep chord in the hearts of young adults.）
第三段第一句结论：based on what has been argued， it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for chinese visitors.
第二句建议: what can be suggested is that parents and teachers should center on the education of art.(也可以改为 it is advisable for parents and teachers to center on the education of art )
第三句展望： unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
（this trend will continue for next several years）
2016年饼状图-高效学生旅游目的调查
由于没有年代变化，所以体现的是不同的比例
第一段第一句总说：as is clearly demonstrated in the pie graph above,（1）there were different factors/purposes that college students would consider when they were travelling.
（2）there were different proportions of the students in a university who did some sightseeing for different purposes.
（go sightseeing /travel around）
第一段第二句数据描述：to be more specific，among these categories, appreciating the scenery was the largest(/highest/ hugest /lowest/smallest) proportion with the percentage of 37% ,after which relieving the pressure came which is 20% ,followed by making more friends ，cultivating the independent ability and other purposes with the percentage of 9% ， 6% and 15% respectively.
第二段第一句过渡：from my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation.
第二段第二句因果论证：firstly，it was due to the shift from material pursuit to spiritual needs that most college students travelled to admire the beautiful view.万能因果2
第二段第三句因果论证：secondly， college students faced more setbacks and challenges in academic research and job market currently，which could give rise to the fact that they had to relieve pressure by travelling.（英语一万能因果素材）
第二段第四句lastly， jack ma has said，“never should we ignore the significance of independence and friendship no matter who we are.”therefore, some students travelled for the purpose of making friends and developing independent spirit.(书信目的模板短语)
第三段第一句结论：based on what has been argued， it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for chinese college students.
第二句建议: what can be suggested is that parents and teachers should center on the college students’ moods.(也可以改为 it is advisable for parents and teachers to center on the students’ feeling 或者 it is advisable for college teachers and parents to advocate this action of sightseeing )
第三句展望： unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2015 饼状图 春节花销
as is clearly demonstrated in the pie graph above, there are different factors that citizens would consider when spend their money during the spring festival.
（首句第二种写法…different proportions of the money that consumers spend on three main aspects and some others ）
简单版本的饼状图模板to be more specific，among these categories, ( buying spring festival gifts )was the largest proportion which was 40%. (the expense of transportation)，(parties and dinners ) and(others) accounted for 20% respectively.
from my point of view,the following factors may 
account for the above situation. firstly， it is due to a long-established social tradition of visiting relatives and friends in spring festival that most citizens spend the most money on giving gifts. secondly some people would like to communicate with friends and relatives ,which gives rise to the fact that they spend more money on parties and dinners. lastly,jack ma has said ,”never should we ignore the importance of our parents no matter where we go.” thus, nearly everyone will return home by various modes of transportation.
第三段第一句结论：based on what has been argued， it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really true for chinese citizens.
（建议句省略，因为不需要建议）
第二句展望： unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2014 城市乡村人口变化as is clearly demonstrated in the bar graph above, there were obvious changes in the number of civil and urban population in china during 20 years.to be more specific, the number of rural population in china decreased slightly from 834 million in 1990 to 674 million in 2010.on the contrary，there was an obvious upward trend of the number of urban population from 300 million in 2013 million to 666 million in 2010.
from my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. firstly，it was due to the the advancement and development of the health care and education that more rural people came to big cities. secondly ,the government advocated building big cities ,which gave rise to the fact that more people came to metropolises. lastly, jack ma has said,“never should we ignore the importance of geographical advantage no matter what we do.”thus ，more people went to big cities.
第三段第一句based on what has been argued， it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for chinese citizens.
第二句建议: what can be suggested is that average people should center on this population change.
第三句展望： unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2013as is demonstrated in the bar graph above, there are different proportions of the students from four grades who have a part-time job in a college. to be more specific，among these categories, ( the senior students ) are the largest proportion， which is 88.24%. (the junior students)，(the sophomores ) and( the freshmen) account for 71.93%,71.13% and 67.77% respectively.
from my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. firstly，it is because the senior students needed working experience to hunt for an ideal job that most of them have a part-time job. secondly, the senior students want to broaden their horizon , which gives rise to the fact that they are eager to find some part-time jobs. lastly, jack ma has said ,“ never should we ignore the significance of an internship no matter what we do. ”
第三段第一句based on what has been argued，it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really reasonable and positive for college students. 第二句建议: what can be suggested is that parents and colleges should center on this phenomenon.第三句展望： unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2012as is demonstrated in the table above,there are different proportions of the employees’ satisfaction with their company from three periods of the age.( there are different proportions of employees who have difficult attitudes towards their company.) to be more specific,among the categories, employees aged from 41 to 50 who are dissatisfied with the company is the largest percentage ，which is 64% . employees under 40 years old and above 50 who are disappointed account for 33.3% and 10% respectively.
from my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. firstly，it is because employees with the age between 41 and 50 have more family burdens that most of them want higher salary . secondly, most employees over the age of 50 have been on a higher position , which gives rise to the fact that more of them are satisfied with the current situation. lastly, jack ma has said ,“ never should we ignore the significance of young employees’ need no matter what we do. ”obviously，there are also a considerable number of young employees who are not satisfied with the company.
第三段第一句based on what has been argued， it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really unreasonable and negative for the company. 第二句建议: what can be suggested is that the head of the company should center on this phenomenon.第三句展望： unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.
2011as is demonstrated in the bar graph above,there were obvious changes in the proportion /sale of three kinds of car brands in china from 2008 to 2009. to be more specific，the proportion of chinese auto brands increased dramatically from about 25% in 2008 to approximate 33% in 2009. on the contrary， there was a downward trend in the sale of japanese auto brands from around 35% in 2008 to about 25% in 2009. the percentage of american car brands remained stable during the same period.
from my point of view,the following factors may account for the above situation. firstly,it is because chinese auto-making technology and chinese brands auto corporation have advanced and flourished recently that the sale of chinese brands jumps rapidly. ( an increasing number of consumers choose cars such as chery and byd.）in addition, some japanese auto companies propagate their cars in an exaggerated way ， which contributes to the fact that growing consumers in china discard/abandon brands like toyota and honda.lastly, president （具体人名） has advocated: “ never should we ignore national brands wherever we go.”these words strike a deeper chord in chinese people’s hearts . （such chinese corporation as byd designs their brand with innovation using chinese character 唐 ， which arouses chinese consumers much interest.）
based on what has been argued, it is of no difficulty for us to draw a conclusion that the phenomenon represented in the graph is really/clearly reasonable and positive for chinese car brands. it is advisable for japanese car brands to reflect on their undesirable behaviors in order to turn the table in the competition. unless current conditions go through enormous changes, this trend is projected to continue for next several years.